And then, you find yourself inside a water puddle. You see the currents and waves flowing by, besides you. But you’re just stuck there. Completely immobile. And alone.
– Suri
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Perhaps you could speak a little louder?
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I guess? 😛
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Hello
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Hey! 😀
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Why guess? If you are asking if people can hear you, you are presumably not getting the reactions that you expected. There are two obvious possibilities: They cannot hear you (so speak louder) or they do not understand you (so clarify). 🙂
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Aha! Noted. Maybe I need to do both of these. Thanks. 🙂
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Reblogged this on xdayschocolate.
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May be im deaf by dellusion but i can feel you by my heart more louder than you speak! hearing of someone by his sounds is mechanism but hearing of someone’s internal sound is something magnificent!
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Whoa! Cool enough! Thanks for sharing your views. 🙂
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Even I speak too soft.
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Hehe…
We know it’s consequences, right? 😦
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Yeah 😦
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Wow… I’m falling in love with these liners.. ❤️❤️❤️
And oh yes.. I can hear you!!
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Aww.. Thank you so much! 🙂
You made my day with your sweet words. 😉
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Anytime loveheart!! You’re sense of literature is wow!! It’s more like a novelist writing.. ❤️❤️
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Aw.. thanks a lot for the encouragement! 🙂
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Yell for help and swim in order not to sink.
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Yep! Let us begin with our self-deviced rescue operation! 🙂
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Your words speak to how I currently feel.
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Glad that you could relate.. Thanks for reading. 🙂
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Wow. Short and deep.
I have read the comments and I thought may be change the perspective a bit.
So, I’m going to try something. From the perspective of the person trapped in the puddle. Please don’t hate me.
“Scared I was, stuck and alone,
Screamed my lungs out
For someone to hear me
For that current to take me,
Never did I feel so helpless,
Yet, I never did lose hope.
Tired and awry, I looked around
And found myself in a sea of small puddles
Stuck and alone like me,
Scared and screaming like me.
With a little hope, a step we took
And then another.
When we finally met
Our joy had no bounds.
We weren’t alone anymore.
United, we were the stream
And the currents carried us,
While we sang the song of success. ”
PS : I apologise if ruined your post.
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Nope. You haven’t at all ruined the post. Instead, you’ve just helped increase it’s beauty.
You sure do have a great outlook on things. An awesome perspective. I loved it. Thanks for sharing your views. Keep stopping by! 😀
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Why, thank you!
Phew! I am glad you liked it. 🙂
Sure thing.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Most welcome.
Keep Blogging. Stay good. Take care! 🙂
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Stay good? Will try to! 😛
Keep blogging, take care. 🙂
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🙂
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I really love the beautiful words, and the art that ties in with them, Suri.
Do you make these or do you just find them?
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The pictures followed by my writings are just random pictures that I find on the Internet.
My own artworks are included in the tab/ page titled “My Drawings” on my blog. And if you can’t find it due to some reason, it’s here: https://twinklespark.wordpress.com/category/my-drawings/page/2/ 😀
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https://twinklespark.wordpress.com/category/my-drawings/
Oops! The above one was probably an incorrect link.
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Simple but touching and I can hear you.
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Hehe.. Thanks a lot! 😀
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It might be a nice enough puddle, though, perhaps?
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Noooo.. Puddles aren’t nice! It contains “stagnant” water, which doesn’t allow you to keep moving forward!! 😦
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I am sure alot of people face this delimma..
Ps: your writing is beautiful!!..:-)
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Yep, they do. 😦
Thanks for the compliment. Glad you like it! 😀
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You deserved it 😀
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Hehe.. You made me smile! 🙂
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🙂
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Fear prevents you from moving once you take some of the power away from fear all will move again
Thank you for visiting
As always Sheldon
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Wisely said. Thank you! 🙂
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Your Art is amazing
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Well well.. This is just a random picture that I’ve found on the Internet. 😛
To view my own artworks, you can always click on the tab titled “My Drawings” on my blog. Or you can even click on this link https://twinklespark.wordpress.com/category/my-drawings/
Thanks for stopping by!:D
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Reblogged this on flotts.
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The Longest Journey keeps you guessing until the very end, drawing you fully into its world until you don’t really want
to leave (good thing there’s a sequel’Dreamfall: The Longest Journey).
The more highly placed a person was, the more opulent was his attire.
They enjoy themselves pretending as character from medieval era.
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🙂 Thanks for stopping by and sharing your views.
Keep visiting! 😀
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you
are okay
~
you
are not drowning
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you
are
learning
h o w
t o
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f . . l . . o . . a . . t . .
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Whoa! That’s a great way to look at things. 🙂
Thank you for your kind words.
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I hear you loud and clear.
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Thanks a lot for your encouraging words. 🙂
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You are not alone…..soldier on and Garfield hugs 🙂
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Thanks a lot for your warm words. 🙂
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🙂
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lovely picture 🙂 I like that little girl in the picture 🙂 You’re not alone little girl 🙂
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Heehee.. thanks a ton for your support & encouragement! 😀
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You’re welcome 😀 😀
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🙂
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You are not stuck but u r flowing… turbulent…..moving towards a bay of happiness through a narrow ridge of less self belief, in the end where u fall, everyone is waiting to hear you.. 🙂
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You’ve put in a unique perspective. I like it! Thank you for sharing your views. Keep visiting! 🙂
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